What a powerful and gripping story! It tackles some heavy themes like child abuse and the complexities of fostering with a blend of urgency and emotion. The way you portrayed Ben’s bravery and the fierce protection from Colleen and Ray really pulls at the heartstrings.
The tension builds effectively throughout, especially during the confrontation with Mrs. Campbell and the Franklins. The emotional weight of Ben’s situation is palpable, and the final resolution feels hopeful while still acknowledging the real struggles faced by children in similar circumstances.
I also love how you included the detail of Colleen making mac and cheese for Ben; it adds a touch of normalcy amidst the chaos and shows her nurturing side.
Overall, it’s a well-crafted narrative that highlights the importance of listening to children and taking their concerns seriously. I’m curious about how the family will adjust to their new life together after everything that happened. Would you consider expanding on their journey as a blended family with Grace and Ben?
Simon Cowell concerns fans with appearance as they ‘don’t recognise him’
Simon Cowell has sparked concerns among his fans after a video was posted in which he calls on people to audition for the next series of Britain’s Got Talent.
In the clip, the TV judge appeals for contestants for the programme, stating: “I always say on this show, two or three minutes can change your life. And it has. And maybe this time it’s going to be you.
“So please audition now for next year’s season and I look forward to meeting you.”
But many were left shocked and stunned at Cowell’s appearance, saying that they “didn’t recognise him.”
One person wrote: “Simon Cowell brought to you via Nintendo Gamecube it seems.”
Another replied saying: “Ya wouldn’t think he had work done at all. Flawless.”
Someone else simply asked him: “What have you done to your face?!?!”
Do you think Simon looks different? Let us know in the comment section below
Leave a Reply